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[=Snowboard Kids: Hidden Track=]

whey :D

heres me reviewing! XD well this beats every other song in orginality for sure. i really like it, its true to style in every way aswell! only thing to point out that might break the style was that there was too much bass in the kicks. other than that i seriously can find anything wrong with this. i loved the melody and can totally see this beeing used in a snowboard/ski/xmas quest game for an old console. the beginning reminded me of flicker X)

one last thing tho, i dont see why you called the song that, since, it might confuse so many, even tho it says in despcription, it fooled me the first 15 sec or so. ah well its no biggie... well, nothing left to say but; this deserves 1 place. in my opinion this is the best one in the MAC so far. keep at it :D 5/5 9/10

WritersBlock responds:

Hey, whoa, thanks man!
I got a PM from darkside about weather my drums were 8-bit enough, haven't heard from him yet, though.
Ahh, the name of the song, well, snowboard kids was the inspiration for the tune, I probably could've changed back to the original title "winter division" (that seems the logical choice), but, yeah, it's not the most important part of the song.

1st place? Wow, that means a lot coming from you, but your song is seriously in contention, the best cover, at least. I think we'll see some good entries coming in the last few days of the comp.

Cheers for the review.

[Brainwave]

eh...

i liked the industrial sounds alot, but simply not how they were put together. the whole song lags behind making it sound more like some machine that got jammed rather than techno.. nice try tho :)

[Highway Joyride]

heh,,

i can hear that you used music 2000, thats probably why this never got any atention. you diddnt make any of this, you just put it together.. better luck next time tho

SRT-4PLAY37 responds:

i suppose you go and record sounds and have never used a sample program have you...or a drum machine...and BTW it wasnt music 2000 i wouldnt use such a low grade sample mixer.

[sUper n0va]

loving those drums!

thats a insanely sweet drumriff you got there :D the rest was also good ofcource, but the drums really had me. awesome effects too, but maybe alittle loud compared to the other songs. i see you used the usual bassline ;D well, to me its usual anyways, back in the days i always used that. anyways, nice start violin aswell! i feel the synth kinda steal all the atention tho, but thats just my opinion. keep up the great work! damit those drums man. lol

N0VA64 responds:

Thanks so much!! :D It really means a lot to have a really amazing artist give me a positive review! Especially since garageband screwed up my volume during compression.D:< I'll definitely try to work on my balance in future songs and not just have one instrument steal all the attention. Thank u so much for the review and keep making awesome songs!

[Falling Farther (Trance Remix)]

nice work :D

woah o.O this is really nice. it kinda reminds me of the snowy multiplayer level from the timesplitters series. i love how the drums are mastered, they are perfectly placed and serves its purpose without overkilling the rest of the song. i diddnt know you did such awesome tracks :D im kinda ashamed not to visit your audio page sooner. one thing tho, is this a remix of one of your songs, or someone elses? cause i dont know the original, in any case. but this was really well made, and a pleasure to listen to! altho i diddnt like the trance leads so much, they were maybe a bit to controling and hard. otherwise, a great submition!

Karco responds:

Glad you like it! :D Personally I like the drums too - they were a bit tricky to master so I'm glad you think they came out well! And don't feel ashamed, it's not like I'm particularly famous or anything here on NG, right? Though I'd definitely like to be. ;D This is a remix of an older song of mine I submitted last April, though not in the usual sense - this also represents the direction I originally was planning to take the song, if it weren't for the lack of resources and skill level, and the fact that it took off in a completely different direction the first time. :D Hmm, that lead of mine seems to be something some people like, and some people don't. Personally I'm fine with it (why else would it be in this song, right? ;D) but, ah well. Not every song is perfect. :P Thanks for reviewing! :)

["Before Mydnite" F-777]

hm...

this melody is from another song o.O i dont remember the name of the song but, they sing something about dancing and having sex in a car. lol, anyways, if this was a intended remix, good work! but you have to write it in the description, or else pepole could really get pissed =/

F-777 responds:

Ummm could you please find the name and pm me? The only thing i can thing of is hearing this song somewhere and accidently ending up with this melody cause it was in my head or somthing...but i need a name...

[{dj-N} The Ending]

nice :D

sexy stuff :D i actually liked that it wassnt longer, it kinda made me think of a endboss in a insane shoot-em' up :D im kinda short of words today when it comes to reviewing im afraid, so its hard to give you any constructive criticicm here. but there issnt really anything i feel need improvement :D good job! since youre so awesome at what you do, its even more awesome when my music actually inspieres. ^^ keep up the great work!

[Axel F (Up Yours Crazy Frog)]

aws man

count me in on the hate. jamba must burn in hell, nice remix too ^^ needed alittle more beat perhaps, other than that, nice work!

[Draze - The Phaze Way]

The melody!! :D

hay, ive been listening to this on and off for some time now, it suits the walk to work. i just have to drop in to tell you that, its not only a awesome song in almost every aspect, but that melody. thats what kept me listening over and over. its actually best after 3:00. where the melody kicks in for real. i would have asked to remix this, but i really dont know how i could make it better. XD so ill leave it at saying, this owns, keep up the good work!

[Derailment (Part 2)]

hm.

this does not belong in techno at all, but i really liked it. it was creepy in a subtile way. the pulsating bass kinda promises something awefull, but it never gets there. nice little audio :) good work!

Qwertyuiopasd responds:

well Derailment Part 1 is more technoy, but of course it's from 2006, and for me that means it sucks. pity you can't change things genres; I don't see why that would be so hard.

but yeah, this was meant more for the "vocals" so it should be in miscellaneous.

~Qwerty